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I'm playing around with manga studio and for practice I'm re-drawing and updating my first version of #Nezumi-Toriki. Only the first chapter will updated and digitalised for practice (course I only draw half a chapter back than ><). After I will post the 2010-2011 version and update that one before I start on the real thing ><
This version is more like a prologue.
<--- Read Right to Left <---
I need help with new names for the characters that are called Ben and Sarah in this version ><
I draw this version before I found out that Japanese names were different from our western names ><
In the newer version:
Ben: is un-named (calling him Zero for now)
Sahra/Sarah (forget how I spelt it and too lazy to check): Un-named (Calling her Saya for now ><)
Mick: Yashan
Jill: Jiru
Jen: Un-named ><
Comment or note me if you can think of any good names ><
(The digital version is set out differently from the original paper version)
Title: Nezumi Toriki (English: Mouse Trap)
Summary:
In this world is made up of time and space, twisted together so that one cannot live without the other. At every one time, there are only two being that can wield time and space magic, the strongest form of magic but also the most constricted form of it.
The last known twins that wielded the magic of time and space were born over 3000 years ago and dissappeard when the they were still very young. It is believed that the two sisters are still alive abut somewhat captured and are not able to die.
Zero(maybe renamed) and Saya(maybe renamed) were from Nebuna and excapted to Earth before the planet exploded, Yashan is a human that wields sealing magic and little Jiru is an un-aging 8 year old. These four all met on earth and have been given the task of finding and hopefully rescuing the missing twins
Nezumi Toriki (c) *xXChirushiXx
This version is more like a prologue.
<--- Read Right to Left <---
I need help with new names for the characters that are called Ben and Sarah in this version ><
I draw this version before I found out that Japanese names were different from our western names ><
In the newer version:
Ben: is un-named (calling him Zero for now)
Sahra/Sarah (forget how I spelt it and too lazy to check): Un-named (Calling her Saya for now ><)
Mick: Yashan
Jill: Jiru
Jen: Un-named ><
Comment or note me if you can think of any good names ><
(The digital version is set out differently from the original paper version)
Title: Nezumi Toriki (English: Mouse Trap)
Summary:
In this world is made up of time and space, twisted together so that one cannot live without the other. At every one time, there are only two being that can wield time and space magic, the strongest form of magic but also the most constricted form of it.
The last known twins that wielded the magic of time and space were born over 3000 years ago and dissappeard when the they were still very young. It is believed that the two sisters are still alive abut somewhat captured and are not able to die.
Zero(maybe renamed) and Saya(maybe renamed) were from Nebuna and excapted to Earth before the planet exploded, Yashan is a human that wields sealing magic and little Jiru is an un-aging 8 year old. These four all met on earth and have been given the task of finding and hopefully rescuing the missing twins
Nezumi Toriki (c) *xXChirushiXx
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this is pretty interesting, i like how you used the textures and stuff, even though they're a little heavily put on.
also.... sorry, but isnt this pretty much almost exactly the same as the beginning of Tsubasa: Reservoir Chronicle?
Also, in manga, you don't need a lot of descriptive words. the picture should speak for itself. Unless of course, you meant it to be dialogue, or a narrator, or something. but even a narrator doesnt need to say much if the pictures are there. catching my drift? (
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I've never made a real manga, and if you see my horrible attempts at manga pages you might think I shouldn't be talking, but I've read a lot of it and I know my stuff. I'm sorry if I offend you, I just mean to help!
also.... sorry, but isnt this pretty much almost exactly the same as the beginning of Tsubasa: Reservoir Chronicle?
Also, in manga, you don't need a lot of descriptive words. the picture should speak for itself. Unless of course, you meant it to be dialogue, or a narrator, or something. but even a narrator doesnt need to say much if the pictures are there. catching my drift? (
)I've never made a real manga, and if you see my horrible attempts at manga pages you might think I shouldn't be talking, but I've read a lot of it and I know my stuff. I'm sorry if I offend you, I just mean to help!